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[Hell on Planet X part 1]

half way working

graphics are ok but you need to put more time in on the sound. all of the sound bytes over-lapped and made the scene with tom, the fat commander guy, more comedic then you intended. for the second one you are planning on making, go over the sound multiple times and make sure they don't overlap.

also, and this is my own preference, if you tone down the detail of your characters you can concentrate on on making the animation move smoothly.

SeNtoX responds:

yeah, i understand. i will take your review into concideration.

[A pirate is free]

critique

this has major potential but the lack of time and animaion drag it way down in the poop

kourel responds:

heh thanks ^^ I'm surprised it has any potential whatsoever I am not a very good animator.

[Color This World]

nice take

i didn't expect that

YouriX responds:

Thanks man! I'm glad you liked it :)

[The Culex]

i like it

but im skeptic that this is truely your first animation. maybe your first full animation but not first animation. there is some complicated tweens and actions for a first animation.
unless you got help
still like the vid though

ConteDePatiernis responds:

No no this is really my first animation! and where I live nobody know how to turn on a PC... -_-
But I worked with Flash before for a school project, that isn't an animatione, but a kind of "power point" work (text & images), and so I started to use flash and lern the bases.
Then I start to do "experement" with it, infact my "really" first animation is the intro (with all that stuff), end then the Culex, but the same Culex is an "experimant", infact, you can notice that the animation is a little better after every scene.
However thanks for your review!